Sunday, November 28, 2010

Divine Puppets 4

DISCLAIMER:  Some readers may find this post absolutely unnecessary or maybe even foolish. I am a debutant in this genre. My sincere apologies to them and also to the one to whom this forte belongs.


 For the rest, especially those who had read and enjoyed the prequel(s),  here I go...


Suno Friends,
Now He has to travel half the country’s length to see her everytime. This time He will be in the city just for a day. Now waiting for She early morning after tiring two days journey, He is getting impatient. She is getting ready and she can’t leave until it’s time for college. Meanwhile, She receives frantic calls where He is enquiring that how much time will she take.  Every call occurs after every two minutes precisely.
              
Just when She is about to leave, receives a call where He shouts back ;

“Don’t you come now. I am going back.”

She calms her down,” Wait ! I am coming. I am really sorry.”

“No need to come now,” He shouts and slams the call.

Hurriedly, She boards the metro where a 1 hr 15 min journey begins.
And the string of calls begin again. He is back to normal (Lucky She everytime!).
Never had this long journey been so long, She informs He of every station that has passed.

Count Down begins…

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Finally, She is at her destination.
She runs into that direction where He is standing.
Overjoyed, excited, elated, She approaches him.

Suddenly realizing that He has overlooked her, She stands right across him and demands a response.And the only thing He has to say;

Oh! Is it you? I couldn’t recognize you!

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She (then): Can She bang her head somewhere?
She (now): Why does She find everything cute about He?

5 comments:

Anirban said...

Tuli, this was SWEET !!!
I vividly remember, how impatient I was getting, waiting at the New Delhi metro station. I kept calling you again and again, and told you to inform me at every passing station !! lol. The Delhi trip is special in every possible way !
You are an awesome story teller, Tulika !! And I am amazed to see how you blended your style of writing with the Jab We Met style, and came up with something which has the best of both worlds !

Amazing !! Awe-inspiring !!
Keep It Up !!

Unknown said...

you people are such teddy bears... do you want me to cry?? this is fucking cute!! ^_^

Anwesa said...

:) Nice one again Tulika !



P.S. : She finds He cute - in every sort of way - coz every action has an equal and oppositely directed reaction :)

Tulika said...

@ Anirban:

Nautanki !!

Waise you are much- much better at this. It's strange though :P but that's true.

@ Priyala:

LOL..ya, fuckin cute..! :D


@ Anwesa di:
Thank you di. :)

Naina said...

:D :D